Only thing I wish was different was the long pauses for dramatic effect. They seem to be too long, shortening them just a little bit would be fine. Other than that I love the game!
I wish more was happening. Like in the text, I feel like the creature should have been "stalking" the character so it builds up throughout the game. Other than that I liked it overall :)
I love it! I'm honestly not sure if it was user error but the battery runs out pretty fast on the camera. Maybe I was supposed to alter between my character's vision vs camera. Not sure but other than that its good! :)